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Here is the final version being submitted to the newspapers in Michigan, California (Lord Xar) and Arizona.
why? Michigan has 300,000 people who say hey trace ancestry to the Middle East, we could win them over, and win the Michigan primary which is one of the first states to vote. California biggest population of muslim/arab community Thanks for the Donations so far Thank you Proemio, Max, Nefertiti, Lord Xarand all of the donors and supports of this ![]() Black and White ![]() weve reached our goal keep donating for LONGEVITY of this flyer HELP US RAISE $600 $0 left to go, untill we set up a new goal for a new city!!! please donate to this project 5 dollars is helpful Even if we reach our current Goal we would still like to get more, for the longevity of the newspaper. THANKS donors Hook$50 LibertyEagle$50 Diane-$10 Stephen-$20 Michael-20 Proemio-$100 Eric-$9-10 Nick (ronpaulradio) 30.99 Corydoras-$200 Auction-$25 Lord Xar-$40 Max-$15 specsaregood-$50 weve reached our current goal keep em coming (thank you!) braheemhamadeh@gmail.com paypal I APPRECIATE IT SO MUCH.
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Edit: nevermind, you got the links fixed.
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Hamadeh-You've got to quote the article exactly. You can say crazy on the top but the original had "wacky" so you have to use that in the quote. Also, put three periods ... where you removed the stuff about Kuchinich. This is proper quotation techniques.
You also need to capitalize "Iraq War." Not lowercase war. (I worked as an editor for 3 years).
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relax will ya...the world is not going to end with "wacky" vs. "crazy".. wacky will confuse ethnic people, cause a distraction...and totally dilute the power of the hook.....DO NOT USE THE WORD "WACKY"...under any circumstances trust me on this...i work in marketing and write ad copy as part of my living...i may not be Madison ave...but this much i am sure about.. the word wacky will kill this ad |
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hamadah, as you mentioned I will head it up in California.
I will alter your ad just a tad for that run. |
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ham..
i just sent you $15.. thanks for your leg work in getting this done.. |
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If anyone lives near detroit these would be prime
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I think hamadah's ad will handle that area.. let him clarify..
btw.. 40 more to you. |
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i need these in a downloadable version for flyering in arab areas of NJ....
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