I'll give you two objects and see if you can tell me which is organic: a newborn baby and Frankenstein. If you guessed newborn baby, then you have a good hold of what organic means. That's easy. It gets difficult when you apply organic to things. Let's take two pieces of writing: your essay Super Organized Societies... and my essay The Rebirth of Story. Which of these lives and breaths and which one is Frankenstein?
Here's what I would tell you if you were one of my writing students. Start with a hook. Something peripheral you that can return to later. An essay should not be a brain dump. Also, cut extraneous words. Don't write sentences like "My observation has been that when confronted with the truth about freedom..." Leave out "My observation has been" Or better yet, say it in a more simple way. Your writing will be more organic. And you will be on your way to understanding organicism.
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