NEW Ron Paul's Keep Social Security SECURE Ad (not official)

[coffeewithchess]

Thoughts, comments, feedback, critiques, changes? Like it, don't like it?


Any critiques on how to perhaps improve it would be greatly appreciated.

Slightly updated from initial critique received:

[slamhead]

I think it is good. This is something the campaign should have been promoting long ago. Paul needs to toot his own horn more often on this subject as he has always been the only one looking out for the seniors.

[coffeewithchess]

I think it is good. This is something the campaign should have been promoting long ago. Paul needs to toot his own horn more often on this subject as he has always been the only one looking out for the seniors.

Yea, I think if the campaign could put together a "doomsday" type ad, showing how ALL the other candidates are leading to the end of American (look at Europe), and Social Security, Medicare, and all the other programs are in jeopardy, it would be effective for possibly waking some people up...but then again, the zombie mentality is amazingly strong.

[GeorgiaAvenger]

We ought to make our own ads and run them. How much is airtime?

[coffeewithchess]

We ought to make our own ads and run them. How much is airtime?

Somebody has a Google TV ads thread up, that shows where a guy paid $1,200 and his ad was seen by about 1.2 million people. Do the math, and it makes you wonder how every single American with cable tv has not yet seen/heard about RP with the amount of money being raised/spent.

[Butchie]

I like it, only thing maybe is when you mention "healthcare", not sure if some will hear that and then lump it in with things like Obamacare, etc, maybe leave out the statement where he says he won't touch healthcare and replace it with something specific?

[coffeewithchess]

I like it, only thing maybe is when you mention "healthcare", not sure if some will hear that and then lump it in with things like Obamacare, etc, maybe leave out the statement where he says he won't touch healthcare and replace it with something specific?

Thanks for the feedback! Just edited the text, and that clip, and about to reupload it with the slight changes.

[coffeewithchess]

I like it, only thing maybe is when you mention "healthcare", not sure if some will hear that and then lump it in with things like Obamacare, etc, maybe leave out the statement where he says he won't touch healthcare and replace it with something specific?

Here's the slightly updated version:

[Butchie]

Here's the slightly updated version:

"I'd buy that for a dollar" - Good job.

[coffeewithchess]

"I'd buy that for a dollar" - Good job.

Only a dollar?
Thanks for the original feedback again though, +rep!