How does this hoodie look?

[Nirvikalpa]

Alright, made my own design for a hoodie. If someone can just look over the quote on the back and make sure I didn't spell anything wrong, it would be appreciated. I checked a couple of times but after staring at Illustrator for 4 hours (snow days are awesome), I think I am starting to see things.

The liberty/USA is a clipart I ended up having to make all over again because liberty was holding a gun... and it just seemed a bit too violent if I was going to have a RP quote on the back, so a peace sign fits much nicer.

Both designs are huge.

Front:



- some of it is black because I am putting the design on a black hoodie.

Back:

[Kotin]

A++

[MRoCkEd]

there are some grammatical errors, but it would look stupid to add [sic] lol

[Nirvikalpa]

there are some grammatical errors, but it would look stupid to add [sic] lol

Where? I need to correct it, if you ppplease.

[thehighwaymanq]

I would wear something like that.

But I'm goin wait til the C4L store and get a sweatshirt from there.

[MRoCkEd]

Where? I need to correct it, if you ppplease.

The moral and constitutional obligations of our representatives in Washington are to protect our liberty, not coddle the world, precipitating no-win wars, (?) while bringing bankruptcy and economic turmoil to our people.

The moral and constitutional obligation of our representatives in Washington is to protect our liberty, not to coddle the world, precipitating no-win wars while bringing bankruptcy and economic turmoil to our people.

Only one obligation is listed (to protect our liberty).

I am not sure whether or not that comma should be omitted.

[Nirvikalpa]

Crap. Now I have to go with what he said (obligations and are) or obligation and is.

[Captain Bryan]

I want one of these.

[ShowMeLiberty]

Crap. Now I have to go with what he said (obligations and are) or obligation and is.

I'd go with the exact quote since you also have his name on there. Very well done, btw!

[mediahasyou]

If someone can just look over the quote on the back and make sure I didn't spell anything wrong, it would be appreciated.

spell check dude.

[muzzled dogg]

bring back the gun and dump the rp quote then it'll be straight

lets see some pics of u modeling it

[Grimnir Wotansvolk]

I'd say just keep the quote as is, to preserve it's authenticity of origin. There's a big difference between speaking in ebonics, and merely sliding a little with colloquial dialogue; it still gets the idea across quite bluntly.

And nikki, that hoodie looks great. I've avoided wearing political stuff because so much of it is loud and tacky, but that's something I'd be happy to buy.

[Nirvikalpa]

I'd say just keep the quote as is, to preserve it's authenticity of origin. There's a big difference between speaking in ebonics, and merely sliding a little with colloquial dialogue; it still gets the idea across quite bluntly.

And nikki, that hoodie looks great. I've avoided wearing political stuff because so much of it is loud and tacky, but that's something I'd be happy to buy.

Alright, I am keeping the quote how he said it. Thank you for your compliments

Thanks guys

[muzzled dogg]

Alright, I am keeping the quote how he said it. Thank you for your compliments

Thanks guys

why how did you ebonicize it?

[Mini-Me]

I want one of those!

[Nirvikalpa]

I just received it today! It looks great, I really recommend SpreadShirt.

The lettering (of the quote) was too small for their machine to cut out, so I had to make a black background for it. But, it still looks awesome. I am very, very happy woman. Shipping was ultra fast, and there's always coupons that are available to save money.

I might put these in a store to get a few bucks - or I might just put the designs up too.

[kaleidoscope eyes]

Nikki, that hoodie is terrific! Wear it with pride as I'm sure you will.
Also, love your new signature, what a beautiful, fitting quote.

[Bill M DC]

Are the T's union made - printed by a union printer?