View Full Version : Final draft of third Bay Area newspaper ad
linusPAULing
01-22-2008, 04:29 PM
Sorry... too late for changes. Hopefully it's ok:)
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2067/2212252307_8bd6cd4c5d.jpg?v=0
This is third of a series:
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2298/2196185714_6fe90d4f88.jpg?v=0
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2404/2184478648_f1dd669e57.jpg?v=0
DeafEric
01-22-2008, 04:50 PM
Looks good someone please check spelling and grammar.
I would include something about respecting states' rights and ending the DEA raids on cancer patients / medical marijuana clubs when advertising in CA
dannno
01-22-2008, 05:19 PM
I would include something about respecting states' rights and ending the DEA raids on cancer patients / medical marijuana clubs when advertising in CA
Respects the Doctor/Patient relationship and believes in health freedom and alternative medicine.
Will end DEA raids on state-sanctioned medicinal cannabis dispensaries.
linusPAULing
01-22-2008, 06:30 PM
Thanks for the input everyone. We have a fourth ad to come, so perhaps we can get into some of this content.
MayTheRonBeWithYou
01-22-2008, 06:32 PM
You guys really do a great job on these.
Heather in WI
01-23-2008, 03:27 PM
Is there anyway to get pdf copies of your ads? We would love to use one in Milwaukee.
WRellim
01-23-2008, 03:41 PM
Too detailed... you are trying to sell on "features" and narrowly defined "issues" -- you need to sell BENEFITS and work on people at the emotional level, whether we like it or not, THAT is how people decide who to vote for.
Heather in WI
01-23-2008, 09:44 PM
bumping
Inflation
01-24-2008, 02:17 AM
Too many words.
those are gorgeous. if i modded anything it would be to inside round the blue corners
i just noticed the borders around his pics are off a little
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