URGENT: Need advice on a Newspaper Ad for Northern CA

[linusPAULing]

Here's the latest draft of the ad. What do you think? Note, it's targeted for the East Bay of SF, CA.


http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2123/2176608290_835d44845c.jpg?v=0

The picture I have of RP is low res. I need a higher res pic, at least 300 dpi. Can someone point me to a higher res pic?

[me3]

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[slantedview]

i think habeus corpus is spelled wrong ?

also that last line i'd change to something else (raked in doesn't seem the right choice of words). how about "raised a record breaking $6,000,000 in one day"

also might want to add "from individual donors" to the end of that line, to emphasize that it wasn't corporations that helped him get 6 mil.

[linusPAULing]

i think habeus corpus is spelled wrong ?

also that last line i'd change to something else (raked in doesn't seem the right choice of words). how about "raised a record breaking $6,000,000 in one day"

also might want to add "from individual donors" to the end of that line, to emphasize that it wasn't corporations that helped him get 6 mil.

Excellent! Thanks!

How about this?

"Raised a 24 hour record-breaking $6 million from 58,000 donors."

[hillertexas]

bump...who has a high res picture?

[me3]

Received $6 million in 24 hours from 58,000 small donors.

[linusPAULing]

Received $6 million in 24 hours from 58,000 small donors.

Yes, I like that.

[Haywood1974]

I can do a "psuedo high res" PM me and I can have it done in 5 minutes

[AdamT]

Please post a high res when you get the final draft. I am running newspaper ads around here soon and I like your design.

[mr_x]

i think habeus corpus is spelled wrong ?

also that last line i'd change to something else (raked in doesn't seem the right choice of words). how about "raised a record breaking $6,000,000 in one day"

also might want to add "from individual donors" to the end of that line, to emphasize that it wasn't corporations that helped him get 6 mil.

yep, it's spelled habeas corpus. i also agree with you about the last line.

also, try not to put the word "and" at the end of the list, as it makes the list look like it's coming to a close. we want the list to look like it could go on and on. other than those suggestions, i'd say it looks really nice. :)

[Haywood1974]

http://www.ronpaul2008.com/uploads/image/48.jpg I believe this is the same photo that you have already. It is showing in Photoshop that it is at 300 dpi

[linusPAULing]

http://www.ronpaul2008.com/uploads/image/48.jpg I believe this is the same photo that you have already. It is showing in Photoshop that it is at 300 dpi

Thanks, hopefully they'll be able to reduce the picture and maintain decent resolution. We may need a bigger picture of his face at 300 dpi, not sure.

[linusPAULing]

Thanks everyone. Looks like the new picture should work fine.

It will run on Thursday.