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skolwulf
12-27-2007, 08:26 AM
Subject: Ron Paul's First Payday - Help make it a success


The time has come for Ron Paul’s first payday. Head over to http://www.ronpaul2008.com/donate and donate your pledge amount today.

Your continued help is needed to increase the success of Ron Paul’s Payday.

1) In support of Ron Paul’s Payday I have also put out a new video on youtube: [Ron Paul’s Payday – Fridays for Freedom #1]. Your help is needed to push this video up the charts so it can get visibility. Make sure to watch it, rate it, favorite it, comment on it, and digg it.
2) If you are a member of ronpaulforums.com or dailypaul.com (or any other sites), please leave a positive comment on any Ron Paul’s Payday threads to keep them bumped all day long.
3) Send out word to your local meetup group reminding and informing them about Ron Paul’s Payday.
4) Contact your favorite Pro Ron Paul website and ask them to put up a banner supporting Ron Paul’s Payday

After you have fulfilled your pledge obligation, consider donating any extra that you have in your weekly budget to one of the many grassroots efforts that are trying to help Dr. Paul such as [Operation Live Free or Die], [OperationNH], [Ron Paul DVD Bomb], and [The Ron Paul Blimp] to name just a few. Also, unplug for a bit and go talk to people about Ron Paul. Show the world his support is real, vital, and growing like mad.

Don’t forget to check out [Donate2008.com] and help push the good doctor over 20 million for Q4 on New Year’s Eve.

Special thanks to:

• Each and every one of you for your support of Ron Paul for President
• Jim Hughes for all the tireless work he has done to make [ronpaulspayday.com] the best donation pledge site to date.
• Carrie Carpenter for encouraging me to get the project off the ground and designing the great array of banners for promoting the site.
• Jesse Elder and Eric Nordstrom from [ronpaulmoneybomb.com] for pioneering the weekly donation concept and redirecting the ronpaulpayday.com site to ronpaulspayday.com.


See you all next week when we blow the top off the numbers we get this week.

Troy Fisher

skolwulf
12-27-2007, 08:28 AM
Please proofread and leave me any feedback on how to make this mailer more effective. I will update the original post as improvements are adopted.

[] indicate places where links will be included.

francisco
12-27-2007, 10:18 AM
skol,

Have you been able to link up with dan at ronpaulgraphs.com? In addition to putting up charts that are customized for Payday, he might be willing to give you a plug on the site.

skolwulf
12-27-2007, 10:30 AM
skol,

Have you been able to link up with dan at ronpaulgraphs.com? In addition to putting up charts that are customized for Payday, he might be willing to give you a plug on the site.

Jim has put in a feed from the website and Dan is working on some graphs for us, but I understand that he is pretty backed up so I'm not sure the timing of the new graphs.

kushaze
12-27-2007, 10:31 AM
bump

FreeTraveler
12-27-2007, 10:35 AM
1) In support of Ron Paulís Payday I have also put out a new video on youtube: [Ron Paulís Payday Ė Fridays for Freedom #1]. Your help is needed to push this video up the charts so it can get visibility. Make sure to watch it, rate it, favorite it, comment on it, and digg it.



You should have a link to this video to make it easy to promote.

skolwulf
12-27-2007, 10:37 AM
You should have a link to this video to make it easy to promote.

That is the plan. [] denote places where i plan to have links - but the video isn't up yet, actually it's not even made yet, so I need to get to work :)

skolwulf
12-27-2007, 10:58 AM
no comments on the email itself?

Rebel Resource
12-27-2007, 11:00 AM
Each and every [space] one

skolwulf
12-27-2007, 11:05 AM
Each and every [space] one

Updated, I also added some wording in a couple sections. Please reread it to make sure everything is ok.

european
12-27-2007, 12:36 PM
no comments on the email itself?

looks very decent :)

Sey.Naci
12-27-2007, 02:25 PM
Troy, that's a fantastic email. I like how you make the point of supporting other grassroots efforts. Wish the naysayers wouldn't work so hard to derail what other people have decided to do!

francisco
12-27-2007, 07:43 PM
Suggest that you end the e-mail with a second linked reminder to donate at the official campaign site; and that both these lines be set off by themselves and in in larger font size.

Looks great, well written!

skolwulf
12-27-2007, 11:09 PM
Suggest that you end the e-mail with a second linked reminder to donate at the official campaign site; and that both these lines be set off by themselves and in in larger font size.

Looks great, well written!

I'm sorry francisco I didn't see this one until now so I don't think it will be integrated this time, but i'll try and do it this way in future emails.