My 30 sec Ron Paul ads- TV worthy?

[911cartoon]

I made these..
any of them TV worthy??

reagan one
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qPUz2mDyBc0

freedom one
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=U6Z-f97QqvU

xmas one
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LKyquzrRr3s


=D

[cmc]

Wow, nice! I really like the first one.

[OV 101 Enterprise]

I like them. You should make them say Dr. Pauls name out loud, as most people will not read a commercial on the TV. Very well done, however.

[911cartoon]

you know what's funny? I found that a really effective way to get people's attention to a TV is DEAD SILENCE.. have you ever seen those cell phone commercials where a person drops service and it cuts to silence. I ALWAYS whip my neck to look at the TV because it catches you off guard! hehe

[Ibtz]

Well done. I liked the first one the best.

[me3]

I don't like the third one because it is too hard to follow the scrolling letters, but other than that effect, all 3 ads are really, really good.

[davidt!]

Very good. You should send those to headquarters. The last one is my favorite.

[BLS]

I thought they were all pretty good. I like the 1st and 3rd best though.

[dmspilot00]

I like the 1st one the best, but I also like the 3rd. You did a great job.

[tamor]

I like the first one -- Reagan One
Too many people still do not understand the federal reserve/IRS issue so the 2nd one will be confusing.
The third one has a religious overtone

[Mental Dribble]

I like 1 and 3.

[weatherbill]

1ST ONE was the best, third one second best

throw out the second one.....visual eye sore taking from message in that one

[ctb619]

The first commercial is by far the best.

[justinc.1089]

The first one with Reagan was excellent!

If we can get that one aired here in SC you have no idea how many people thinking of Ron Paul as being unpatriotic or whatever will give him a second thought when they see him shown as being like Reagan. Everyone I know around here thinks Reagan was a great president, even most democrats around here, and the Republicans think of him almost the same as like Jefferson. So showing Ron Paul to be like Reagan won't do anything except good for him in SC which is our toughest state.

The other two were good, but not quite to a television level. I think they had a little too much reading, and a little too much going on you know? Most people just won't follow all that on television.

But you did an awesome job with the Reagan advertisement, and I really think we should try to air it here in SC because it would go over great I think. The only thing I would change would have been using a quote from Reagan directly mentioning Ron Paul, but its hard with only 30 seconds to do everything lol.

You did exceed my expectations with that video though!:D

[weatherbill]

ron paul is better than reagan........alot better!

[Peppy690]

i would run the first and third

[Shellshock1918]

Great ads!

[Just Come Home]

I definitely like the first one...

I just watched the second one, and I don't think the second quote about the fed printing all this money is a good line there for first time viewers who don't understand the Federal reserve issue. You should put a quote in there about getting the government off our backs.

[justinc.1089]

Yeah most people don't understand the federal reserve stuff, and it takes way more than like 3-5 seconds to explain it lol.

[derekjohnson]

The first one is great.

[justinc.1089]

Yeah the second would probably look a lot better if you had the video normal, not just showing inside the letters of freedom. If you want to have the word freedom go across the screen it would probably be a better idea just to have it go over the video playing normally instead of having the video inside the letters.

[nullzero]

First and Second one are great! A little fine tuning they would be ready to run in states.

[0zzy]

You know, I never clicked on this thread cause I thought you were a noob. But those are pretty darn good!

[justinc.1089]

bump

[Goldwater Conservative]

Those are all excellent. The campaign should really look into saving money and getting better quality ads at the same time by turning to the grassroots.