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oldsmobile98
05-18-2012, 10:47 PM
OK, sorry to nitpick, but this is not professional.

The latest email I just got from Rand had a couple obvious ones.


"But I could tell he always tell he knew the country he loved would return to her founding principles."

and


During my father’s last campaign, I remember seeing signs that read, “Ron Paul Cured My Apathy.”

I can only guess that these were carried by men and women, young and old, who finally felt like they finally had a voice – who finally felt like they mattered.

oldsmobile98, they couldn’t be right.

In case you're wondering, the first one has an extra "tell he" in there. The second one should read, "...they couldn't be more right."

This isn't amateur hour, Benton and Tate. And why did you guys send out an official campaign memorandum saying we probably won't win? I dunno what y'all are doing, but this is supposed to be a campaign to make Ron Paul the President of the United States of America, not Student Council President of Peoria Middle School.

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