Jon Huntsman Facebook Pro-War Ad (feedback needed ASAP)

[coffeewithgames]

UPDATE - I have two ads running on Facebook now:

They appear as:
http://i.imgur.com/gIE0o.jpg
Which links them to this video:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4oJOwLZgSEs

This one just posted it up last night, targeting more liberal minded voters:
http://i.imgur.com/22alh.jpg
Which links them to this video:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eCj_grOCMak

[brendan.orourke]

Replace TARP with bailouts, and NDAA with indefinite detention of American citizens.

We're trying to sway average people, and they don't know what those mean.

[IterTemporis]

I have a coupon for $25 for Facebook Ads, may I use your ad too for people from New Hampshire who use Facebook?

[ItsTime]

Replace TARP with bailouts, and NDAA with indefinite detention of American citizens.

We're trying to sway average people, and they don't know what those mean.

Might not fit, but it is a good point. He also supported individual mandates and cap n trade.

[ItsTime]

This would be better IMO http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_embedded&v=4oJOwLZgSEs

[Muttley]

Looks pretty good...I like it. Definitely consider the verbiage tweaks above if possible.

[Warrior_of_Freedom]

When the happy music plays... oh God please change the music, lol.

[coffeewithgames]

This would be better IMO http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_embedded&v=4oJOwLZgSEs

Haha, already have that one running. You missed our thread at 3:00AM last night!

[coffeewithgames]

When the happy music plays... oh God please change the music, lol.

HAHAH! I asked about it last night, and nobody said anything! I could leave it silent, but then I need to reupload it...

[coffeewithgames]

I have a coupon for $25 for Facebook Ads, may I use your ad too for people from New Hampshire who use Facebook?

Yes, the more it runs in New Hampshire, the better. Also, make sure to target ONLY New Hamsphire residents, and probably the "independents" and "liberals" (I think is how it is) with this one.

[CaptainAmerica]

He better deploy his 3 daughters on the frontline if he starts a ww3.

[coffeewithgames]

Update with word changes:
http://i.imgur.com/yk2g0.jpg

New video without ending piano music uploading now!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eCj_grOCMak

[coffeewithgames]

Bump, check the OP to see both videos, and opinions would greatly help...ASAP.

[ItsTime]

Haha, already have that one running. You missed our thread at 3:00AM last night!

Ha good! I was just creating one for that! This is what I had.

http://i41.tinypic.com/2582hlj.jpg

ironically the captcha for uploading to tinypic was "flip-flops" hahahaha

[Barrex]

If I may be so crazy to go again against all of you :(

Why attack Huntsman? After NH he is gone. I would rather go with positive ad or after Santorum. I would use existing videos. There are some pretty awesome ones....This thing with facebook ads is great.

[lucent]

Avoid cap and trade. Huntsman draws from the leftest side of the undeclareds.

[lucent]

If I may be so crazy to go again against all of you :(

Why attack Huntsman? After NH he is gone. I would rather go with positive ad or after Santorum. I would use existing videos. There are some pretty awesome ones....This thing with facebook ads is great.

Uh because Ron Paul and Huntsmans are competing for voters in NH.

[coffeewithgames]

Avoid cap and trade. Huntsman draws from the leftest side of the undeclareds.

Which is called knowing your target audience, and why I left that out.

As for "Why Huntsman?!"

Yea, heard a lot of the same toward Santorum in Iowa, if you DON'T take their votes away now, a 2nd place finish does us NO good as for MOMENTUM.

[paulpwns]

DO NOT LINK THINK PROGRESS!

They constantly smear Dr. Paul, his supporters, and are funded by George Soros.

[Barrex]

Uh because Ron Paul and Huntsmans are competing for voters in NH.
Negative ad against person who is gone after NH is not effective as positive or one going after someone who will stay after NH. Positive ad would be remembered longer (because it talks about candidate longer). Negative just until person attacked is out of the race (only 1 sec about actual candidate for whom people should vote).

Again: Great Idea just matter of tuning it.

[WD-NY]

ThinkProgress = more believable to the NH voters who are choosing between Huntsman & Paul

[coffeewithgames]

bump for helping in NH today.