New Tea Party Graphic

[Bacon]

http://img250.imageshack.us/img250/7093/tp07su1.jpg

I've updated the image, let me know what yall think..

[NinjaPirate]

The fonts are a little cartoony, but I like the fade!

[austin356]

super nice base to work with.

mimmicking the official campaign font would look better.

[Jobarra]

Hmm... how about the Ron Paul Revolution being on the building instead of the ship. Being on the ship kind of lends credance to the Ron Paul Revolution being the bad guys since the ships were the ones that were being looted of tea to be thrown into the water.

[NinjaPirate]

I think he was trying to center the Ron Paul Revolution and that was the best place for it. It would've been out of place elsewhere. I think it's fine.

[Bryan]

Hmm... how about the Ron Paul Revolution being on the building instead of the ship.

I was thinking the same thing- or at least make it look like the Ron Paul Revolution is on a banner, either hanging from the ship or the building. :)

Great job!

[Jobarra]

I was thinking the same thing- or at least make it look like the Ron Paul Revolution is on a banner, either hanging from the ship or the building. :)

Great job!
Ah, that's an excellent idea :D

[austin356]

Can we get the campaign to create a special flash widget for the weekend and then build graphics around that?

[literatim]

I like it, but I don't particularly like the slogan. It gives too much of an impression that we are having some kind of get-together.

I think the Ron Paul Revolution logo should be a logo on the bottom left or right corners of the graphic and not on the ship.

[Austin]

Very clean looking! I think more attention should be put on the name Ron Paul. I like the idea of making the revolution banner appear like a flag..

[Gimme Some Truth]

Pro's :

-Clean looking
-The orange scroll-like tint
-Clever addition of the RPrevolution sign (tho would be better as a flag)

Con's:

-Font is far too cartoony
-Ron Paul isnt emphatic enough.
-Slogan is quite comedic - in a bad way :P

Suggestion:

-As stated, make the RPrevolution sign part of a flag
- Would be kind of neat to substitute the hats,in their hands, for Ron Paul signs :D

[jacmicwag]

Agree with the suggestions but overall - what a work of art! Sure glad none of us surf while we're at work.

[Tidewise]

Hell yeah! On the right track. Just need to finalize the slogan. And I agree that the font should be something more old tyme (with a modern flair, if possible).

[Mckarnin]

Adding the: "Something is Brewing in America" as the banner message would work better.

Edited to add that: "Freedom is Brewing in America" might be an improvement on the previous line.

[Bacon]

Thanks for the input everyone, I appreciate it!
I changed the image up some based of the critique and I think it looks a lot better already. Many want more Ron Paul emphasis, should I add his picture or what?

Let me know what yall think about the new one..

http://img250.imageshack.us/img250/7093/tp07su1.jpg

[Mckarnin]

Looking good!

"Brewing a Revolution" is a nice tie in to the tea. :-)

[Mckarnin]

P.S. Edit your initial message to mention that a new version is at post #15. Also, nice new placement of the banner.

[Gimme Some Truth]

Looking really good now. Love it.

I wouldnt mind getting my hands on your .PSD when you finish , so i can make some different ones, yet keep them in the same vein for stuff like text , layering and whatnot :)

[itsnobody]

I like it, it's great

[jrich4rpaul]

"Brewing a Revolution" is the best slogan so far. good job

[Bryan]

Love it! I started LOL when I saw the banner on the building! Perfect! Really, it's great to go as-is IMO and it's a super tool to get people excited about the event seeing Ron Paul as part of the Tea Party, its a perfect blend to take you back. If you have extra time to burn I do like the idea of having a few of the people who are holding their hands up to have some Ron Paul signs instead- it would just compliment the banner and add a finishing touch to draw you in.

Again- great job!