View Full Version : Rate this Philly Rally Radio Commercial

Matt Collins
11-05-2007, 11:56 AM

Matt Collins
11-06-2007, 10:43 AM

11-06-2007, 11:49 AM
Are there any radio ads running in Philly this week for the rally?

Matt Collins
11-06-2007, 12:33 PM
A guy named Brandon contacted me and told me to make this commercial so that it could run this week.

11-06-2007, 03:57 PM
yep it is running this week. Thanks Matt!

PS: Check your email.

11-06-2007, 04:22 PM
very good! im so excited!!

granny miller
11-06-2007, 04:58 PM
Sounds good :)

Man from La Mancha
11-06-2007, 05:00 PM
thanks for the effort.


11-06-2007, 08:54 PM
Thanks! I've updated the unofficial site with a link.

11-06-2007, 08:58 PM
Great ad. My only comment, if not to late, is to not start with "you need to" and instead something welcoming, "come see..." or something like that.

11-06-2007, 11:24 PM
"and why it is important to support him for president" < - sounds too fast

but otherwise its great

11-07-2007, 12:07 AM
I didn't even catch that it was about a presidential candidate. Slow it down a smidge.

I also agree that starting off with "You need to..." is too insistent sounding.

Matt Collins
11-07-2007, 12:39 AM
Thanks for the input