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reepotomac
04-18-2010, 06:14 PM
My project has morphed slightly. In addition to changing the psychology of the entire nation, I want this to be so big even HE knows about it. I added some links so you can request the song no matter where you live. There are also featured states where I have sent the CD. Send him this big fat thank you seismic shift in pop culture mentality. Request the song.
http://home.covad.net/jcringer/overview.html

Feelgood
04-19-2010, 09:41 PM
WOW I hate country music, but that was great! :)

Icymudpuppy
04-20-2010, 08:22 AM
Forgive me for criticism.

The lyrics are good, but the singer is off cadence, out of key, and monotone.

The instrumentals are dull and repetitive. They don't "stick in your head" or grab attention.

I would sell just the lyrics to a nationally known "outlaw" country artist like Merle Haggard, and let them tweak it if you really want a national following.

teacherone
04-20-2010, 08:26 AM
pretty good!


Lyrics
Now tell me again how this country is the land of the free and the home of the brave
You can't really believe that what you see now is the reason so many brave men gave
Teacher used to say we had the Bill of Rights
I think they took our rights and sent us the bill
Well I don't know about you my friend but I think I've had my fill
They been walking on me for my whole life I think it's finally time to draw the line
You can tell old John Cougar Mellencamp he can stick his song where the sun don't shine
My country my ass- This is not the land I learned about in class
My country my ass- That freedom justice stuff is all in the past
Got a checkpoint up the road ahead better pull out your ID
And your taxes just went up again gotta cough up some more money
Be careful what you're saying when you're on the phone you never know who might be listening in
They got cameras watching everywhere you go so they know just where you been
You know you better think about the books you read or your name might go on a list
Don't take too many pictures now, or they'll think you're a terrorist
They're watching you every time you turn around and they don't like what they see
You gotta be f*** ing kidding me if you think this country's free
My country my ass- This is not the land I learned about in class
My country my ass- That freedom justice stuff is all in the past
Well the banks messed up so they took money from us and gave a zillion dollar bonus
And they didn't give a damn what we had to say I swear to God they think they own us
But when they say "bend over" and you say "yes sir" and then you vote for them again
If you're the kind of people who fought our wars tell me how'd we ever win?
They been walking on us for far too long and don't you think it's time to draw the line?
Why don't you tell those jerks in Washington to stick their laws where the sun don't shine
My country my ass- This is not the land I learned about in class
My country my ass- That freedom justice stuff is all in the past
They say America love it or leave it
Well I loved it, and it left me

reepotomac
04-21-2010, 05:18 PM
Forgive me for criticism.

The lyrics are good, but the singer is off cadence, out of key, and monotone.

The instrumentals are dull and repetitive. They don't "stick in your head" or grab attention.

I would sell just the lyrics to a nationally known "outlaw" country artist like Merle Haggard, and let them tweak it if you really want a national following.

Number one, and I mean this... I can't sing.

Instruments, no comment, but it looks like I'm gonna re record the whole thing from scratch.

Sell it?.....To Merle Haggard? ...I haven't bought a lottery ticket in a long time.
Nah, your criticism is fine.