Hip Hop song featuring Ron Paul's "What If" speech

[LibertyForever]

just finished making it :D hit me with some feedback I'd appreciate it, and sub if you like.

also: the quality isnt top notch because of youtube but the mp3 is better.

YouTube - Strivfe - Third Eye Cypher (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AsEEMrI69m4)

[dannno]

huh not bad

[LibertyForever]

thanks. :cool:

[Ron_Paul_Knows]

I thought it was pretty sweet man. The first time I listened to it, I thought it was kind of cool, then like an hour later I realized I had that choir singing in the background stuck in my head, so I listened to it again and liked it even more. Good job!

[BlackTerrel]

I dig it

[foofighter20x]

Might want to have a bit more music before getting into the speech and lyrics.

[revolutionary8]

I really appreciate the morale boost, esp. w/ what has been going on around here lately...
The Timing couldn't have been better.

I like it. I LIKE IT A LAWT.

[revolutionary8]

Might want to have a bit more music before getting into the speech and lyrics.


I think he did a great jawb, and your opinion is completely subjective.
IMO, we have too many "hollow lyrics" and not enough "true dialouge and discussion".

edit- nothing personal foo, Just using your words as a launch pad..
it's my belief that we need to stop treating the American people as retarded. It does us no good to "talk down" to them, or try to "smoke screen" the truth. Boiling the Frog doesn't work in reverse...

[qwerty]

Music is too loud i think! :(

[revolutionary8]

Music is too loud i think! :(

The audio is WAY off in the beginning, Thus the initial aversion to RP's voice- has NOTHING to do w/ anything other than the AUDIO. What RP was saying needs to be heard clearly, not shouted from the rooftops.;)

[LibertyForever]

The beat is only around 2:10 long so i had to make do with it..I would've liked to have some beat play before Ron's speech but didnt have enough time to do it so to speak. anyways thanks for the love i appreciate it. :rolleyes:

[Dreamofunity]

I think the begining of his speech is a little off given the beat, maybe slow it down a bit or something so it fits better.

Who is rapping the main part? Strivfe? Is that you?

[Ron_Paul_Knows]

Awesome lyrics!:D



government plans to cross perilous lands
still shoutin commands the power's in the same hands,
never changin no exchanging the third eye
enables me to be not contained or chained
but not many are ordained from the sins maintained
with their mind's self contained within a transparent maze..
dont taze me bro...with the seeds i sow, speakin out
against the establishment with my truth speak flow,
to bestow amongst the blind these rhymes thought crimes
in this country of mine media misguides with lies to disguise
the cries that arise from the treasonous guys, bilderberg
group and the trillateral commission
on a mission to end our traditions, they call us enemies of the state,
for the words we paint, of a brave new world..full of hate
and no debate from the sleeping sedate,


wake up rise
and shine bright and early sweet child of mine from
the paralysis bind taken hold by design by those
corporate swine the corpulent wine and dine on
the backs of millions of americans taxing our dimes

economic implosion through corruptions explosion
impoverished conditions were
in a position of purposeful
demolition by politicians
but with opposition and thoughtful
ambition i spit back with lyrical ammunition

so use your intution
to make an informed decision, trillions in debt,
no end in sight, and this isnt about the left or the right,
it's for our rights that we fight for..
life liberty and the pursuit happiness shifting
to strife, authority, and mass sadness, the badness
and ashes to ashes fervent madness, fear mongering,
consumerism, greed, and stock market crashes,
our country's now fascist, the republic is gone...
we're marching down the road to tyranny singing it's song

[eOs]

Did you make this beat?

[LibertyForever]

The beat was made by Thirdeyefocused a producer on youtube.

I wrote and rapped the lyrics.

[Cinderella]

i really like it...how can i get it on my ipod?

[LibertyForever]

download here:

http://www.reverbnation.com/#/strivfejokerhiphop

[Ron_Paul_Knows]

I've had this stuck in my head all day. :D

[LibertyForever]

nice! haha that's what I was going for. :D

[Dreamofunity]

The beat was made by Thirdeyefocused a producer on youtube.

I wrote and rapped the lyrics.

Badass.

I would consider myself a slight consumer of said "underground" hip-hop, and enjoyed this song. The production and flow was very professional, I originally thought this was some (relatively) famous rapper I had just not heard of yet, but even more excited to hear it's just one of our own.

[LibertyForever]

yeah, our movement definitely is a pool of talent, above above, I believe..in many fields.

[foofighter20x]

I think he did a great jawb, and your opinion is completely subjective.

Did you miss the part where has asked for feedback?

That means he wants my opinion. And yes, that means it's likely to be subjective. ;) :rolleyes:

[s35wf]

Awesome lyrics!:D

Im not into rap; but I LIKE your lyrics! Publish them "poem" style and change/alter the music/beat NOT the message!

GREAT JOB!