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Trassin
09-26-2007, 01:02 AM
Thx everyone that reviewed it. Removed it so as to not become a templet.

Grandson of Liberty
09-26-2007, 01:18 AM
Excellent. . .one nitpick- I'd change at least one of the "going"s in reference to the bridges. Maybe something like "reaching across the Mississippi" instead. Like I said, just a nitpick. . .your letter was very well done.

Trassin
09-26-2007, 01:19 AM
Good catch, I knew that sentince didn't sound right for some reason.

Edit: Changed it.

Trassin
09-26-2007, 01:58 AM
K, going to take it down now, thx guys.

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