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10-16-2008, 06:28 PM
For those of you who had expressed some concern with the conspiratorial last part of the original story...i did tone it down a bit, but dont want to abandon the possibility entirely either..
Instead of shouting conspiracy, the story now just hints at it. It leads one to the doorway of conspiracy theory, leaving the reader free to choose if he wishes to enter it or not...
feedback on the last section ("THE WRAPUP") is appreciated
www.tomatobubble.com
Instead of shouting conspiracy, the story now just hints at it. It leads one to the doorway of conspiracy theory, leaving the reader free to choose if he wishes to enter it or not...
feedback on the last section ("THE WRAPUP") is appreciated
www.tomatobubble.com