Updated Flyer needs opinions

[amga49]

This flyer is ver 2 of the original flyer created by Shadowhooch.

Additions to this flyer are two photos (one of the constitution on the upper left, and one of Ron Paul on the upper right.

Please be so kind to review this screenshot of the flyer and submit your honest opinions and suggestions, for the final version of this flyer will be posted around my city.


http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1380/1268385494_58be7088bf_o.jpg

Once this flyer is complete I will link the original jpeg and word file to a thread or email it to anyone who requests it.

Peace,
Max

[billm317]

looks good

edit: enough room for another link at the bottom? ronpaul.meetup.com

[amga49]

Good idea about the additional link.

I'm gonna add it to my notebook and update the flyer tonight along with any other suggestions.

Thanks

[ghemminger]

NICE Please PM me a copy

[akovacs]

Personally, I think it has too much text. You want to grab people's attention quickly, and a page full of text doesn't do that (Although this would be a good supplement for someone asking for more information).

I think something like the founder's flyer works much better.

[Tsoman]

It's one of the best I've seen.