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krott5333
08-28-2007, 11:55 AM
http://files.meetup.com/516057/war%20flyer.pdf

:)

Sematary
08-28-2007, 11:59 AM
like it

krott5333
08-28-2007, 12:00 PM
i just added "secure borders" to it.

that outta do it

risiusj
08-28-2007, 12:01 PM
It looks good except for one thing - it's not catchy enough.
This part should probably bigger and at the top:

Congressman Ron Paul has an impeccable record of voting AGAINST the Iraq War since the very beginning.
Congressman Ron Paul is a staunch supporter of the Constitution, individual rights, and limited federal government.
Congressman Ron Paul continues to fight against government secrecy and the unconstitutional federal income tax.

Other than that, it gives a great message.

krott5333
08-28-2007, 12:02 PM
It looks good except for one thing - it's not catchy enough.
This part should probably bigger and at the top:

Congressman Ron Paul has an impeccable record of voting AGAINST the Iraq War since the very beginning.
Congressman Ron Paul is a staunch supporter of the Constitution, individual rights, and limited federal government.
Congressman Ron Paul continues to fight against government secrecy and the unconstitutional federal income tax.

Other than that, it gives a great message.

okay I see what you mean, gimme a minute...

krott5333
08-28-2007, 12:08 PM
okay, i changed it again.

born2drv
08-28-2007, 12:18 PM
I like it, but I'd put an extra line break between paragraphs to make it more readable... it looks like you have enough space to do it.