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matthylland
02-06-2008, 09:18 PM
Hi all,
I was trying to design a flier to give out in Charlotte, NC around the Federal Reserve building there.

It has a lot of text I know...I had too much to say!

Looking for any constructive criticism on it.

I think it looks better printed out then it does in word. I was attempting to make more important things stand out, because sadly, I know a lot of people probably wont take the time to read 1 page.

anyway, have at it

http://files.meetup.com/549818/WHAT%20IS%20THE%20FEDERAL%20RESERVE.doc

(and yes, my email is abolishthecentralbank@gmail.com)

PepperdotNet
02-06-2008, 10:41 PM
"you may know some of these people" - I haven't heard of any of them before and I doubt J6P has either.

Joseph Hart
02-06-2008, 10:52 PM
Looks great! Very informative!

I made one with a little more design if you dont mind?
http://files.meetup.com/637240/FedRes.pdf

matthylland
02-06-2008, 11:10 PM
Looks great! Very informative!

I made one with a little more design if you dont mind?
http://files.meetup.com/637240/FedRes.pdf

thats great, thank you!
what did you use to make that by the way?

matthylland
02-06-2008, 11:14 PM
"you may know some of these people" - I haven't heard of any of them before and I doubt J6P has either.

hmm yeah, I wanted to remain as factual as possible. These were people representing the "big guys"...so maybe I will change it to say something like:

"In 1910, these 6 met in Georgia to plan the creation of the central bank:"

...or something like that?